As I get closer and closer to completing this piece, it becomes harder and harder to see my own mistakes and places where I could possibly fix what I have already written. The hours and hours I've spent staring at my screen trying to write have left me feeling like I have not control over the piece anymore. The piece is about four and a half minutes at this point, but it still feels like I'm so far from actually getting it done. I feel that now I just need to finish the piece and be done with it!
Here are the last few comments from my last presentation of the piece:
- Keep going with the interjections in section “H”.
- There is a part of the “G” section where the vibes are exposed, perhaps use this sound more often as it has a very distinct character.
- The vibes throughout could stand out more, so maybe write them at a slightly louder dynamic than what my intentions are so that they break through the rest of the ensemble.
- Use the vibes to articulate/attack certain notes where another instrument will be responsible for the sustain underneath.
- Use dynamic marks for the swells used in “H”
- Perhaps use the First and Second sections juxtaposed as a way to end the piece?
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