Suggestions:
- Rethink the accents used in the left hand
- Use more notes outside of the key like in section B.
- Introduce those notes earlier on in the melody.
- In the third section, I could put a third voice on the top, giving that voice those off notes.
- Use polyrhythms in the third section to further emphasize my intentions of the perceived metre.
- In the third section, using a scattered low note an octave below the bass every now and then will give even further emphasis on those beats, even FURTHER emphasizing my intentions.
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